Monday, October 19, 2015

Oh Dear!

Hello again from your favorite structure anarchist! I yet again bring you something with form! Never fear, this one has nothing to do with counting!

Actually this is a form that I kinda made up one day for a poetry class in college, I call it the "Dear," form.

Once upon a time a friend and I were joking about our ex boyfriends at the beginning of poetry class and coming forth from that was what we wrote that day!

How to do it? 

Each line of the poem starts with "Dear (name)"
You get one line to say something to an ex or some significant love, example I did my ex boyfriend, my high school crushes, my (then) current boyfriend, my childhood love, etc. Anyways my list ended up to be about 17 names long.
For each name, you get one sentence plus one word (optional) Example: "Dear Steve, at least you made good coffee. Sorry."

Don't have a long enough list? You can go with a list like your bridesmaids, your best friends in college, deceased pets, etc. I've always liked doing this periodically with the same list to see if my feelings have changed towards any of the memories I have of these people. It's a nice reflective exercise I feel, personally I think it pairs well with a glass of wine.

Word prompts: 
Cappuccino
Crashing
Sorry

Sentence prompt: 
The coffee was cold...
Like a sleepy cat...
Do you believe...

Photo of the day:
Photo courtesy of Beverly Tan Photography 

Whatcha think? Write something? Don't forget to tweet/instagram me at @beverlytanfilm #octpowrimo and/or comment below!


Share your poetry with us by linking up. Make sure you visit your neighbors one or two before and after. If you are last on the list go back to the beginning of the list. If you are the first few on the list please go back to the day before and visit the last on the list if you haven't already. Have fun!

1. Bastet  17. malia lawrence page  33. Bullish  
2. Illsa from Team Netherworld  18. tracesofthesoul  34. Mark Jones  
3. Cressida  19. De jackson (WhimsyGizmo)  35. jazzytower  
4. Sunita Prasad  20. vivienne blake  36. Candy  
5. Deepti Agrawal Day 18  21. TwoPaisePoems  37. Aishah  
6. Deepti Agrawal  22. Esther Spurrill Jones  38. Cara Michaels  
7. Tortured Cyclone  23. Diary of a Writerbee  39. Kay Winter  
8. Payal Agarwal  24. barbara  40. Camille Wylde  
9. Al the Author  25. Amrita Paul  41. Nithya Venkat  
10. Fida Islaih  26. Jesi-The Lunatic Poet  42. Jennifer Cunningham  
11. Dawn D  27. TwoPaisePoems  43. mindlovemisery  
12. Barbara_y  28. the lull after shilyot  44. Steph  
13. Nancy Beebe Goolsby Perry  29. Alexandra Corinth (WordsMaiden)  45. Ameena k.g  
14. Carol Campbell  30. Here, There be a Writer  46. S. Elle Cameron  
15. Misky  31. Grace Black  47. Sigrid Saradunn  
16. Ameena k.g  32. Greg Wolford  

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3 comments:

  1. I love the Oh Dear prompt, but didn't have time to do it justice, having just seen my son off back England after an all-too-brief visit. I've saved it for another day. This one litterally popped up in five minutes. I'll be back to read later.

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